The "Well Defended" Proposal
"What succeeds in science is not the best idea, but the best defended idea."

Planning

Before Writing Be Nice to Your Reviewers
Pre-Submission
Checklist
Why Proposals Don't Get Funded


Planning

Imagine a proposal that is due on June 15.  A great deal must occur before the application deadline (which may be unknown until an outline has been developed and a funding source identified).  The hypothetical schedule below (for the typical single laboratory grant proposal) assumes a concentration of effort in the final month.  While realistic, it is always better to finish sooner.  

Be Prepared to: During/By:
Think September-December
Outline January
Seek Advice/ Identify Funding Sources Early February
Rethink Mid-February
Prepare a Draft Budget Late February
Discuss plans with a funding agency Late February
Write March
Revise  April 1-15
Notify department administrator April 15
Ask colleagues to review draft April 15-30
Begin internal paperwork May 1
Revise May 5-10
Finalize budget (with administrator) May 12-14
Solicit final review by colleagues May 15-22
Revise May 23-30
Submit for internal sign-off June 1
Proofread June 1-7
Submit electronically June 10 (be prepared to submit at least 5 days before grant "due date."

This leeway is needed to accommodate possible corrections of errors, electronic delays,  or unforeseen circumstances--all of which may result  in the need to submit a corrected application. This application must be submitted--successfully--by 5 PM on the deadline date to be considered "on time."

Before Writing

Read and understand funding opportunity announcements/instructions

Consider departmental and institutional regulations

Know the specific aims, approximate costs, and necessary preliminary data for the proposal

Talk with a program person at the funding agency

Be Nice to Your Reviewers

Your proposal should:

Be informative, succinct, and logical

Emphasize and re-emphasize the important points in your argument

Use fonts, headings, and spacing that improve readability 

Not hide important information in the Appendix

Contain the kinds of buzzwords, phrases and arguments that the reviewer will want to see

Remember:

SIMPLE and STRAIGHTFORWARD

is not boring.

BORING is boring!

Pre-Submission Checklist

Did you . . . . 

Receive (and read) comments from colleagues?

Adhere like epoxy to all of the funder's guidelines?

Proofread for errors in both narrative and budget?

Have someone with a fresh eye also proofread?

Write an abstract that agrees with the rest of the proposal?

Obtain all the necessary AECOM approvals?

Why Proposals Don't Get Funded

Guidelines are ignored

Importance of the project is unclear

Hypotheses are not supported by literature and/or preliminary data

Project is technology-driven rather than hypothesis-driven

Required personnel and expertise not assembled

Experimental plan is unfocused and hard to understand

Experiments do not include all relevant controls

Potential obstacles and alternate approaches are not discussed

Problems with methods and data analysis

Work load, budget and/or time-frame unrealistic

Weak conceptual framework

Inappropriate acknowledgement of previously published research

Investigators and/or consultants named in research narrative but not listed on budget or "Key Personnel" page

Institutional resources are insufficient

Letters of support were weak or unrelated to the proposal